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Final Major Project: Group Critique Summary Notes – 13th June 2018

Notes from my recent group critique with Victoria Forrest – recorded here for reference and action.

I presented my initial zine thoughts.

Key points for consideration:-

  1. Concept of the zine is sound

  2. Action points:-

  • consider font used – try to standardise throughout the publication, especially in the sayings posts

  • consider using the clipping tool to remove the background from the makeup images – distracting at the moment.

  • too many images on each page – spread out more and don’t be afraid of white space

  • consider giving each item a part number and using that to name the images.

  • image on 3rd page is the only one not square – why?

#FracturedIdentities #June2018

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